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No one ever said we had to skip spaces between paragraphs here at YWS. Most writers do it to make it easier on themselves. I saw no grammatical errors, or ...

I personally didn't like this poem very much. I felt no rhythm while reading it (it has com to my attention that I have only read a few poems on ...

“I think I’m going to quit.” She announced to him (New Line*) “Why would you do that? You just started this position. This will be good for you.” * “I ...

Certainly not my favorite poem, but it was different. I did feel the rush of emotions, but that included confusion... I felt no rhythm, so I just read this straight ...

hi ^-^. I'm RO and I'll be your reviewer for the day! You remind me all the time. Every time I stand on the edge, every time play I with ...

Hm... Amazing description, definitely. I would love to read more of your work and compare. I felt no rhythm with your poem, though, which brought it down from great to ...

Haha, this poem made me laugh. As a Deist (google it; I know it's at outdated religion, but I looked for a label for my beliefs, not the other way ...

I didn't really like this poem all that much. I think you are trying to tell the cliche story of a person who lives in a "bad" world and just ...

Like the last poster said, there was a lot of imagery in here! I enjoyed the poem, but in the last stanza where it says the waves push you out, ...

I have to say that I got quite confused the second stanza, and, while I had a better idea what was happening in the third, I didn't make a full ...

Usually I go through a story with my bold print red pen and point out all the faults I possibly can and be a total, well, critic. I mark every ...

I stared at her gawking for a moment before she stared at me intently so one stared at the other than the other stared back... sounds a little... choppy, maybe? ...

Wow, this is amazing. So full of feeling. The writing was great, and i fund no errors. I understood it all (though the true meaning could've been something beyond my ...

Very good. Very good rhythm, even though you diverged from your pattern briefly. I understood what you were saying, and you gave just enough detail to make it real. No ...

And he was dead God, took long enough. XD In all seriousness, pretty epic first sentence . His body lay face up in the mud, his eyes wide, and his ...